Mrs Rayson’s 112 word challenge

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The Big fat gorilla named Horror was the meanist and the biggest of all animals in the smiling forest of mankind. The gorilla was living in the most dangerous house in the world the DESTROYER. He was never scared of anything except butterflies, he was terrafyed he peed his pants when he saw one. The other animals knew that so one very sunny day the community caght all the butterflies and set them free next to his house. He was just about to get in the shower when one cam in and sat on his head. He saw the flok of butterflies and ran away far far away from the forrest. He never came back.

My Narrative

This week was a massive game for the Red Bulls. They are playing the Jan Juc Gromets. The Red Bulls were down by one with 50 seconds to go. Josh shoots from 3 and gets it in. The Red Bulls are celebrating with 40 seconds to go. The Gromets get it back, they run it down the court they get near the ring when James rejects Kody. Bailey tries to keep the ball in. He does but he falls into the wall and gets knocked out. He even breaks his leg. The room goes silent….. Then everyone rushes over to help him, he lays on the ground then he finally woke up. He goes straight to hospital. The umpire then says Jump .

The Red Bulls win the jump ball, it is tapped down to Charlie he passes it to Lachlan, Lachlan passes it to Josh then Josh passes it to Cooper and then Cooper gives it to Dylan and Dylan shoots on the siren. The Red Bulls win by 2. They are in the finals against the super sonics.

When the day came to play the Super Sonics. The Red Bulls were very nervous because the Super Sonics were a very good team. The game started at 6:40pm it went for 1 hour and 10 minutes. The game started, the Super Sonics got the first goal. At half time The Super Sonics were up 20-2. The Red Bulls coach Gary Hindle tells the boys “ if you work and run hard you might win”.

The Red Bulls get on the court first they are practising their jump balls, where James taps it down to Charlie. Then they set up their attack. The game starts the Red Bulls start their attack. They get 2 easy goals to start off with. They then got 5 more to nearly be in front, but then the Super Sonics score. Then we score but they score again. It is 20-24 with 2 minutes to go the Red Bulls push up. But it takes too long. The siren goes. The Super Sonics win by 4. After the game we all go and visit Bailey in hospital. We give him a surprise by taking him out taking him out to Bomboras for a basketball breakup.

Movie Madness

Comparing characters

Gabato is a very funny character in the movie. He was all ways the one that gets in to trouble or has bad things happen to him.

Sean is sort of a very serious character. I think he is sort of the main character in the story. I think he is the main character in the story because I don’t think there ISVs scene without him in it.

Hank is the step dad of Sean. Hank is all ways protecting Sean so Sean thinks he is not a very good dad. But I think he is looking after Sean.

Character interveiw

How long did it take to film this action packed movie?
How many extras did it take to fill the extra parts?
Where was the movie filmed?
How many scenes were there?
Did you change the the script along the way.

Hollywood hotshot

In journey 3 to the moon Sean and Hank try to be the first people on the moon. But some other people want to be the first. They get stuck on the moon together with food from the rocket.

Hits and misses

I loved the comedy in the movie, like when Gabato fell into the gigantic lizard egg.

I also loved the action because it really brought the movie alive.

I really loved the animation of making big animals really small and the small animals really big.

Critic Corner

Ireally loved this movie when I saw it because it was different to all the other movies I have watched. I straight away bought itwhen i went home, because I wanted to show the rest of my family this awesome movie. I would rate this movie 10 gigantic lizard eggs out of 10.

100 Word challenge-5 words.

The Red Bulls have 2 minutes left in the game. But suddenly the lights go out the sound of feet pounding up the court stops the stadium stops clapping and goes silent. I go outside to try and fix the fuse box. I suddenly hear a noise, the noise was terafying but I had to find the fuse box. I finally find the fuse box but I don’t know whic switch to use. I flick one but it dosen’t work then i filick another, it works. I run into the stadium take off my jumper and start playing the final again.

Feed Back to other students,

I visited Andy and Jared’s post. I said, I think you are a very talented writer. But did you know you put capitals for I. I hope you get show cased because I think you should get show cased. He is from England.

I viseted someone in the England. They did not have spelling mistakes like the other person. I wrote to them,
Hello India,
I like your story. It is different to all of my freinds because someone gets lost in the story. My story is on Basketball. I hope you read it.
See ya


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This is a good school I think anyway. I would love to go to this school and just play and learn. In this school you learn maths by making a dream team with player cards. They have to know the stats to create their team. For literacy they have to write a match review. I really had to think about this video because it was so intresting. I would really like to know who made up this awesome school.

100 Word Challenge-Letter

Dear Fatimata,

I am sorry for you because I love animals as well. Were your animals behaved because my animals are naughty and cheeky. But they are very cute sometimes. Did you think animals were hard work because  I think they are hard work especially my puppy she is very hard too look after. She loves to bite my brothers pants and shoe laseses, she also loves to bark. I would love to meet you one day because you sound really nice. I am going to have to go now so, live safe, love life.

From Josh N

Sentence starters

Mc Donalds-Cheese Burger

In Mc Donalds this year there were ten pieces of bread with eighteen pieces of cheese  and 10 bits of meat in the BIGGEST burger ever.


Bowling Ally

In the local bowling ally there were two teams playing each other. They were really competitive.


Josh was playing in the leaves when a heap of leaves fell on him and he got trapped.


In a valley there was a race on, that was orginised by Townsville. It  was full of opsticals so it was not easy.

Roller coaster

Josh was having a party at Thorpe park. His favourite ride was the rollar coaster but it broke while he was on it so it wasn’t any more.